Aquí presentándose una de las personas latinas que siguen este gran juego. A pesar de ser tu primer juego la escritura es muy buena y a pesar de que la calidad de dibujo no es tan buena como la escritura, sigue siendo una hermosura de juego. Así que dentro de un tiempo, cuando el juego este acabado. volveré aquí y comentare "I was here" y esperare con ansias a que saques otro.
Te has ganado un nuevo fan Sr. Marius
Edit: ya me jugué la update 0.6 y joder el re-diseño del fondo si que le da nueva vida al juego, había olvidado lo mucho que me tocaba la patata la historia de Dax y tengo curiosidad por averiguar el lore del protagonista
Been some time since I played it again.... Glad to see that you're still working on this and I really like it. Lot's of wholesome scenes. The whole plot is coming along great. The whole storm section was my favourite. The rain with the music was perfect. Can't wait for more updates. This story have a lot of potential and I could already see 50 different way it could end.
You did such an amazing job dude! I love everything about it and it just keeps getting better. Can't wait for the next update and keep up the great work.
Hey, I know you're busy with both life and making this game, but here is a comment I made over a month ago about you doing a fantastic job and offering some improvements I did.
Hey Marius, I just want to say thank you for making Sky Division.
It may be a porn game on the surface, but underneath there is a heartfelt story that is surprisingly grounded in some subtexts and I for one figures that's one of the reasons why it's so appealing.
While it's true the art is basic in quality, it does not detract from the game at all, but I, like your followers, still want you to improve your skills so you can create visually better games with your unique style.
Hence why I've extracted the files of Sky Division and did some corrections and improvements to both the English script and image files along with some tips and ideas for you to use for Sky Division. I can send you the Google Drive link if you want.
If you do decide to use them, don't give me credit. All I'm doing is just helping someone with a good story.
wow.. i just can say.. wow. Gary, please, contact me on twitter. i'm interested in your ideas, i've been looking at the folder of ideas and tips. it all looks very interesting. Almost all of your ideas go in the same direction as my original idea.
I was doing that, look at the translated scripts with Notepad++ and no need to reward me, I'm just helping out someone with potential get their feet wet in game making and story writing.
Buenísimo el juego, fue una grata sorpresa la que me llevé, agradecido de haberle dado una oportunidad. Va en muy buen camino y ojalá ver más avances en la historia, por cierto hice un par de dibujos basándome en el cuchillo, la pistola y el pato raro, me gustaría mostrartelos
hola chokolate, gracias por comentar! Me encantaron tus dibujos, se ven muy bien. si tienes alguna propuesta/ idea o alguna consulta no dudes en contactarme por twitter. es la única red social que uso.
Hi i love the game and story I love the descent artstyle and the story is interesting can you make your own discord cause I wanna see the news or new update release I can't wait for new update of the game aand new part of the story!
thanks ! i'm glad you like my project. i still have a lot to improve, that's obvious. i'm not offended i'm not an artist and i have no art knowledge, but i can't pay an artist for now. selling the game could be an option but i doubt it will have many sales, i had 9000 downloads thanks to it being free (that's a lot more downloads than i expected to tell you the truth. ) and the suit/armor of Dax was based on the suits used by the mecha pilots in the anime. the armors are usually small and sometimes have flashy colors. in the original design dax wore a belt with certain devices but i ended up discarding it to make it easier for me to make his poses.
wow im impressed this was a really good game yes the art is simple but i don't care and the story was really good the whole war and the arks all of this was really good and im really invested in it this is going to my little list of nsfw games that actually hsve a good story but there some things i want to say the player and dex are mostly every single day need to leave the cave to colect wood and water they should find a better way to store water for exemple they could make a bigger watter bottle that way they won't need to leave as much to the lake because the way there is obviously long and they also should take a big amount of firewood that way if it starts raining again they will already have dry wood in the cave and just by doing that they will have some more free time to explore the island and maybe find some usefull thing for exemple try to salvage some peaces from their planes or explore for more resources also they should try to find the player's gun it probably fell somewhere it the island dex's gun is going to run out of bullets sooner or later so they will probably need it ..i think im talking way too much also sorry for all the English errors it's not my first language
little edit here
idk if there could be an equivalent of this plant in this planate but theres a way to make water bottles with a plant here a guy making one
they should do that to have a bigger water bottle the only problem is that idk if this planate would have something similar to this plant
thanks for the comment! this month I had a lot of ideas for the future of the game and its development, there is a lot to do and improve, I'm not sure what the future holds for this project, but so far it's going much better than I expected. I focused a lot on developing the relationship between the player and Dax, I guess I left out a lot of things. pd: I also thought that at some point they should look for Dax's aircraft. but that is still in development and I'm not sure how it will affect the characters and the story.
Marius has been active in the comments until a month ago. So, with a sudden change in activity, I was wondering if he was alright. My question did not ask if he was done or close to being finished. Where did you get me rushing him from?
Can anyone recommend me any games similar? That being the game has a femboy / trap love interest that you can eventually have sex with? I saw this game recommended somewhere else and came in not expecting to like it as much as I did.
Preferably sub, I would want the player to be the dom. Howver if there is good game you'd recommend that has the player be the sub I wouldn't mind trying that either.
I've taken a few looks at it but haven't got around to downloading it yet. I'll probably try that next if anything. Any other recommendations? If not that's okay too.
Also, I've played Hard Love Darkest Desires before and plan on continuing it at some point so don't recommend that one cause I already I know I enjoy that game.
Hey Marius, I just want to say thank you for making Sky Division.
It may be a porn game on the surface, but underneath there is a heartfelt story that is surprisingly grounded in some subtexts and I for one figures that's one of the reasons why it's so appealing.
While it's true the art is basic in quality, it does not detract from the game at all, but I, like your followers, still want you to improve your skills so you can create visually better games with your unique style.
Hence why I've extracted the files of Sky Division and did some corrections and improvements to both the English script and image files along with some tips and ideas for you to use for Sky Division. I can send you the Google Drive link if you want.
If you do decide to use them, don't give me credit. All I'm doing is just helping someone with a good story.
i arrived here not expecting much, but now, 1 or 2 days after i installed this, i want to say one thing, this game, even if it's porn, it made me cry, it made me wanting to hug both, the protagonist and dax, supporting them
the day after i played this, i woke up and thought of a great idea. What if you implement a fruit that has an aphrodisiac in it, or make a scene where while the mc is going out to hunt/collect fruit while dax stays in the cave, they find a flower that smells really good and brings it back to dax to smell?
But for now I don't have time to moderate a discord server. If not properly controlled a server can quickly become chaos lol. And I'm not really sure how to start either. Maybe next year when I have some free time I could give it a try.
I like it, it ain't perfect but it's certainly good. Story has me unironically interested, and went a bit deeper than I had thought it would go (A good thing, btw), needless to say Im invested and raring for more.
And for people referring to the audio glitch upon opening the game: For me, I "fixed" it by running the normal exe then the 32 exe, after a while of staying on the title, the audio went to normal on both the default exe and 32 exe. I dont know if any alternate steps happened between, but it worked for me.
sorry about that comrade, in the 5.0 that will be released tomorrow remove the song from the main menu and lower the volume of the other sounds and songs.
I have no idea what causes the error in the main menu song and I couldn't emulate it so I will remove it. I also lowered the volume of the other sounds.
sorry for making your ears bleed comrade. i have no idea what causes that error and i couldn't emulate it so i will remove the song from the main menu.
(alr is a little respect?) my language is not english and everything i am saying is translated with a online translator that does not understand if i am saying something cordially or not. sorry if i sounded rude before.. i guess...
Since first update have i been with this game, good job comrade, lacking in gallery and sounds for scenes but damn fine job comrade. Story is pretty good, and drawing are i would say live and colorfull. The game has a charm to put it simply
Ive loved the game since the first update and it continues to get even better. I do have a suggestion though. Could you maybe add a gallery to view all the scenes? Other than that keep up the great work 👍
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Aquí presentándose una de las personas latinas que siguen este gran juego. A pesar de ser tu primer juego la escritura es muy buena y a pesar de que la calidad de dibujo no es tan buena como la escritura, sigue siendo una hermosura de juego. Así que dentro de un tiempo, cuando el juego este acabado. volveré aquí y comentare "I was here" y esperare con ansias a que saques otro.
Te has ganado un nuevo fan Sr. Marius
Edit: ya me jugué la update 0.6 y joder el re-diseño del fondo si que le da nueva vida al juego, había olvidado lo mucho que me tocaba la patata la historia de Dax y tengo curiosidad por averiguar el lore del protagonista
love it
Been some time since I played it again.... Glad to see that you're still working on this and I really like it. Lot's of wholesome scenes. The whole plot is coming along great. The whole storm section was my favourite. The rain with the music was perfect. Can't wait for more updates. This story have a lot of potential and I could already see 50 different way it could end.
You did such an amazing job dude! I love everything about it and it just keeps getting better. Can't wait for the next update and keep up the great work.
Love the redesign of the background. You are doing an amazing job 10/10.
Thank u!
Hey, I know you're busy with both life and making this game, but here is a comment I made over a month ago about you doing a fantastic job and offering some improvements I did.
Hey Marius, I just want to say thank you for making Sky Division.
It may be a porn game on the surface, but underneath there is a heartfelt story that is surprisingly grounded in some subtexts and I for one figures that's one of the reasons why it's so appealing.
While it's true the art is basic in quality, it does not detract from the game at all, but I, like your followers, still want you to improve your skills so you can create visually better games with your unique style.
Hence why I've extracted the files of Sky Division and did some corrections and improvements to both the English script and image files along with some tips and ideas for you to use for Sky Division. I can send you the Google Drive link if you want.
If you do decide to use them, don't give me credit. All I'm doing is just helping someone with a good story.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1a816Z9spdNMT813kFuiwkAQOgDREPEzx/view?usp=shari...
wow.. i just can say.. wow. Gary, please, contact me on twitter. i'm interested in your ideas, i've been looking at the folder of ideas and tips. it all looks very interesting. Almost all of your ideas go in the same direction as my original idea.
I am looking at correcting the english translation. would you be interested in correcting the english version of the game?
and thank you for the work you did, I want to reward you and work on future updates of the game.
I was doing that, look at the translated scripts with Notepad++ and no need to reward me, I'm just helping out someone with potential get their feet wet in game making and story writing.
I love this game
Buenísimo el juego, fue una grata sorpresa la que me llevé, agradecido de haberle dado una oportunidad. Va en muy buen camino y ojalá ver más avances en la historia, por cierto hice un par de dibujos basándome en el cuchillo, la pistola y el pato raro, me gustaría mostrartelos
Wow looks really good
Send those to Marius, I'm sure that they will appreciate the assistance.
no tengo como enviarme mensajes así que aquí estamos
hola chokolate, gracias por comentar! Me encantaron tus dibujos, se ven muy bien. si tienes alguna propuesta/ idea o alguna consulta no dudes en contactarme por twitter. es la única red social que uso.
Hi i love the game and story I love the descent artstyle and the story is interesting can you make your own discord cause I wanna see the news or new update release I can't wait for new update of the game aand new part of the story!
I hate reading
Get someone to read it to you.
no
that weird
You Werid thinking that Werid
no you werid
Pretty good the art has a certain charm to it (question will there be any footjob content)
thanks ! i'm glad you like my project. i still have a lot to improve, that's obvious. i'm not offended i'm not an artist and i have no art knowledge, but i can't pay an artist for now. selling the game could be an option but i doubt it will have many sales, i had 9000 downloads thanks to it being free (that's a lot more downloads than i expected to tell you the truth. ) and the suit/armor of Dax was based on the suits used by the mecha pilots in the anime. the armors are usually small and sometimes have flashy colors. in the original design dax wore a belt with certain devices but i ended up discarding it to make it easier for me to make his poses.
I loved this game I can't wait to play a new update ihope it come out sooner
Thank u!!
No, this is my first game and I generated the poses from a 3d engine.
fun and great 2000/10
wow im impressed this was a really good game yes the art is simple but i don't care and the story was really good the whole war and the arks all of this was really good and im really invested in it this is going to my little list of nsfw games that actually hsve a good story but there some things i want to say the player and dex are mostly every single day need to leave the cave to colect wood and water they should find a better way to store water for exemple they could make a bigger watter bottle that way they won't need to leave as much to the lake because the way there is obviously long and they also should take a big amount of firewood that way if it starts raining again they will already have dry wood in the cave and just by doing that they will have some more free time to explore the island and maybe find some usefull thing for exemple try to salvage some peaces from their planes or explore for more resources also they should try to find the player's gun it probably fell somewhere it the island dex's gun is going to run out of bullets sooner or later so they will probably need it ..i think im talking way too much also sorry for all the English errors it's not my first language
little edit here
idk if there could be an equivalent of this plant in this planate but theres a way to make water bottles with a plant here a guy making one
they should do that to have a bigger water bottle the only problem is that idk if this planate would have something similar to this plant
thanks for the comment! this month I had a lot of ideas for the future of the game and its development, there is a lot to do and improve, I'm not sure what the future holds for this project, but so far it's going much better than I expected. I focused a lot on developing the relationship between the player and Dax, I guess I left out a lot of things. pd: I also thought that at some point they should look for Dax's aircraft. but that is still in development and I'm not sure how it will affect the characters and the story.
20/10, me gusto bastante, esperare pacientemente para la sexta parte
Muchas gracias camarada!
Does anyone know if Marius Axe is still alive?
Yes, I am still alive at the moment. i'm on vacation. the next update will be released in february.
YES
have fun man
YESSSS
Hey give him some time man
What do you mean?
What I mean is : we shouldn't force content creators , WE should wait until they finish
Marius has been active in the comments until a month ago. So, with a sudden change in activity, I was wondering if he was alright. My question did not ask if he was done or close to being finished. Where did you get me rushing him from?
Bruhh!!! XD
He is active in twitter
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Can anyone recommend me any games similar? That being the game has a femboy / trap love interest that you can eventually have sex with? I saw this game recommended somewhere else and came in not expecting to like it as much as I did.
Sub or dom?
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Preferably sub, I would want the player to be the dom. Howver if there is good game you'd recommend that has the player be the sub I wouldn't mind trying that either.
have you tried Honey Kingdom by PhantomZz
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I've taken a few looks at it but haven't got around to downloading it yet. I'll probably try that next if anything. Any other recommendations? If not that's okay too.
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Also, I've played Hard Love Darkest Desires before and plan on continuing it at some point so don't recommend that one cause I already I know I enjoy that game.
Hey Marius, I just want to say thank you for making Sky Division.
It may be a porn game on the surface, but underneath there is a heartfelt story that is surprisingly grounded in some subtexts and I for one figures that's one of the reasons why it's so appealing.
While it's true the art is basic in quality, it does not detract from the game at all, but I, like your followers, still want you to improve your skills so you can create visually better games with your unique style.
Hence why I've extracted the files of Sky Division and did some corrections and improvements to both the English script and image files along with some tips and ideas for you to use for Sky Division. I can send you the Google Drive link if you want.
If you do decide to use them, don't give me credit. All I'm doing is just helping someone with a good story.
bro can you send me the file
I'd feel better if MariusAxe gets the files.
i arrived here not expecting much, but now, 1 or 2 days after i installed this, i want to say one thing, this game, even if it's porn, it made me cry, it made me wanting to hug both, the protagonist and dax, supporting them
It's one of the best games out there.
the day after i played this, i woke up and thought of a great idea. What if you implement a fruit that has an aphrodisiac in it, or make a scene where while the mc is going out to hunt/collect fruit while dax stays in the cave, they find a flower that smells really good and brings it back to dax to smell?
MrTheOneNOnly yeah thats a great idea
Lets wait and see how Mr. MARIUS AXE takes the story
10/10!
This game is "AMAZING".
INCREDIBLE job Mr. MARIUS AXE.
you should start a DISCORD server.
I second this
Thank u aquaboi!
Wow thank you so much!
But for now I don't have time to moderate a discord server. If not properly controlled a server can quickly become chaos lol. And I'm not really sure how to start either. Maybe next year when I have some free time I could give it a try.
10/10 love the new scenes! I will always look forward for the next updates.
thank you!!! I am so glad you liked them!!!
The game was being uploaded, now it is ready to download. enjoy!
I'm so impatient. When is the next update date?
Hi comrade! literally tomorrow is the next update 5.0 . i hope you like it!
Can't wait.
I like it, it ain't perfect but it's certainly good. Story has me unironically interested, and went a bit deeper than I had thought it would go (A good thing, btw), needless to say Im invested and raring for more.
And for people referring to the audio glitch upon opening the game: For me, I "fixed" it by running the normal exe then the 32 exe, after a while of staying on the title, the audio went to normal on both the default exe and 32 exe. I dont know if any alternate steps happened between, but it worked for me.
ye it fix itself but ye my ears did hurt that one time
sorry about that comrade, in the 5.0 that will be released tomorrow remove the song from the main menu and lower the volume of the other sounds and songs.
I removed the startup song in version 5.0 because I could not solve that problem since I could not emulate it and the code was well done.
Thank u PathOfSteel ! I hope you like the new update!
Uno de los mejores juegos que he jugado jaja me enamore de dax ♡ esperare la siguiente actualizacion
Great story can't wait to become more involved and intermate with dax. The audio needs fixing but so far so good.
I have no idea what causes the error in the main menu song and I couldn't emulate it so I will remove it. I also lowered the volume of the other sounds.
Wouldn't worry about it to much if its just the menu song. On another note, when will the next update most likely be.
thank you! the next update will be published tomorrow.
mute game before opening XD but other than that game is great :)
MY EARS ARE BLEEDING WTF jk but sry what happened i opened the game and my headphones go static
sorry for making your ears bleed comrade. i have no idea what causes that error and i couldn't emulate it so i will remove the song from the main menu.
This game is incredible, I'm in love with it. I seriously can't wait for more, fantastic job so far!
thank so much!! 5.0 available tomorrow!
I get so happy when this game gets updated its my favorite game
thank u!! 5.0 available tomorrow!
thank you for telling me!!!
Have you added chapter 2?
I didn't understand what you said but version 4.1 is to fix the bugs of version 4.0 and I also added some new sounds.
Alr
(alr is a little respect?) my language is not english and everything i am saying is translated with a online translator that does not understand if i am saying something cordially or not. sorry if i sounded rude before.. i guess...
Alr is short for alright
Since first update have i been with this game, good job comrade, lacking in gallery and sounds for scenes but damn fine job comrade. Story is pretty good, and drawing are i would say live and colorfull. The game has a charm to put it simply
Thank u so much comrade!!! i tried to implement a gallery but at the moment i'm not sure how to make it work. i'll keep trying!
nice update cant wait for more:D
10/10 This game is one of the best in my opinion. Keep going you're doing a great job. Can't wait till next update
Thank u! I will continue this beautiful story until I run out of ideas.
Ive loved the game since the first update and it continues to get even better. I do have a suggestion though. Could you maybe add a gallery to view all the scenes? Other than that keep up the great work 👍
thanks for the suggestion comrade. i will take it into account in the next update. and thanks for being there since the first update,
Can't wait for the next update, Dax is so cute and i actually cared about the plot without skipping any line (that's not usual for me lol).
I think your project will be the first I'll support on patreon, keep up like this <3
Thank u prupru! (Love you Nickname) your support help me a lot to improve the game.
Loving in so far really good...
Any idea when the next update will be